One Drop
One drop of Snapple
Is it just a drop; or something more?
Does it hide some secret civilization?
Or is it just a drop?
Does it live?
Does it breathe?
No, it’s just a drop of iced tea.
But what if it did?
Would people drink it if they knew?
Could they bring themselves to kill it?
2 comments:
i enjoyed this robert, it was really cool how you put the words snapple and civilization in the same poem.
i like the philosophical undertones of this piece. :]]
i'd pick another word besides drop. i feel like it's awkward in every line aside the first and seventh [yes i counted ahaha]. i'd break out the theasaraus. sadly i cannot think of a replacement.
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